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1st Feb 2011, 5:39 AM

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ArtistXXY on 5th Apr 2011, 2:01 AM

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Instant criticism (by now I realize it won't work since the drawing is done, but in case you ever plan on redrawing pages...)
*Good faces
*Good tones (they're simple here...but having a good sense of tones- agh...rambling agin)
*Anatomy needs work (boy hand and neck-assuming the chibi boy/girls' oversized feet can be counted as part of the cuteness.)
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